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Task 2: Writing Introductory Paragraph

Ready to master the introduction? Let's dive in and learn how to write a captivating hook and a powerful thesis statement.

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Writing Thesis Statement

What is a thesis statement?
- A thesis statement of an essay refers to a sentence that provides the writer’s purpose of writing the essay.

- The thesis statement:

• contains the main ideas (3) of the essay;
• is the most important sentence in the essay;
• is the strongest and clearest statement in the essay;
• usually comes at the end of the introductory paragraph of the essay.

- A well-crafted thesis statement will guide the structure and content of your entire essay. It's the foundation upon which your argument is built.

 

How to write an effective thesis statement?

-Refer to the 'NITRG' technique below and the example. 

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Example:

Title of the essay:

Students nowadays face greater social pressure compared to the past.

Main ideas:

1) academic pressure

2) conflict in the family

3) peer pressure

Thesis statement: 

I agree that students nowadays face greater social pressure compared to the past due to the academic pressure, conflict in the family and peer pressure

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Types of Introductory Paragraph

You have learned how to write a thesis statement. Now, it's time to focus on writing an introduction. How to write an effective introduction? An effective introductory paragraph consists of:

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1) Hook: You may begin your introductory paragraph by using 2Q2S technique such as questioning, quotes, statistics and stories (refer to notes and video below for more explanation). 

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2) Stance: Whether you agree or disagree with the statement (title of the essay). It can be agree, disagree or partially disagree.  

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3)Thesis statement: Contains the main ideas of the essay. 

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Please download the notes and watch the video. At the end of the video/notes, there is a practice for you to complete. Click 'Submit' to send your work.

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More practices!

Choose a topic. Then, write a thesis statement and an introductory paragraph for the topic that you have chosen. Next, revise  and edit your writing. Finally, publish your introductory paragraph by clicking on the 'Publish' button.

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Topic 1: Technology can replace manpower​

Topic 2: Modernisation promotes positive change in society

Topic 3: Overspending causes negative impact on mental health

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